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You skipped over to the counter and ordered your favorite drink. You were wearing only a small, grey coat, light blue pants, white, knee high socks and black boots. This was along with a kitty hat. People stared at you as if you were nuts. It was the middle of winter, who could blame them? Paying them no mind and being used to it you waited for your order. You hummed a little song you had stuck in your head until you got your drink. You sat down and stared at the white look alike fairies that were snow. Your gaze was focused on the snow until the bell of the café rang. A young man had just came in and was wearing a huge jacket and jeans? He was shivering so violently that you thought he was like those weird armchairs that massaged people. He ordered a hot chocolate and waited. His gaze fixed on you. The snow had slowly begun to fall a little faster as you looked away very quickly. Spacing out into a trance again you watched the snow fall. 'I wish it would snow like this every day…' You thought with a sigh escaping your lips.
"Hey, is this seat taken?" Someone asked. You didn't notice him due to your state. He tapped you on the shoulder to get your attention. You almost yelped when you felt this but instead you whipped your head around super-fast. "U-um… is this seat taken?" He asked again suddenly taken back.
"Oh, no, you can sit there." You smiled. He grinned back and took the seat across from you. You could finally get a good look at him. Blue eyes, sandy blond hair with a cow lick, huge coat and a hat. 'Interesting…' You thought. You sipped your drink and looked back out the window while the dude across from you was getting a good look of you himself. He noticed your dress and shuddered. How could you wear that? He would never know if he didn't ask.
"Aren't you cold?" He asked.
"Hm?"
"I mean with what you're wearing… aren't you cold?"
"Oh," you shifted to look at his blue orbs with your [e/c] ones. "No, I'm quite use to it…"
"Well, okay. So… what's your name?" He asked before he sipped his hot chocolate.
"I'm, [Name]. Nice to meet you." You smiled.
"Cute name for a cute girl, I like it. I'm Alfred!" He grinned back.

-Blah blah blah-


You giggled at Alfred's face as he burnt his tongue on his new cup of hot chocolate. What was this, like the fifth one? How is he not full yet? 'How many does he plan to drink?'
"You'd been talking with Alfred for a while now and were actually really intrigued about his personality. His radiant cheerfulness filled the entire café. During your conversations with him he would turn to talk with other people at different tables. Sometimes he would look over to you and wink while talking. Making them laugh and or freak them out a little bit was very intriguing. You would either watch him or the snow.
Right now Alfred was going on and on about fast food and you had completely spaced out just staring at him. 'I wonder if he likes me… probably not. Maybe I should ask. No, we just met! Oh my…'
"[Name]!" Alfred gave you quizzical look before pushing a paper in your face along with a pen.
"Sorry!" You yelped quickly taking the paper and pen. "What were we talking about?"
"I was saying that I need to head out and that we should totally hang out again sometime. Oh and I need you to write your number!" He said with pink dusting his cheeks. You blinked. 'How did he go from fast food to exchanging phone numbers??' You shrugged it off and wrote your number neatly before handing it to him. Alfred grinned and leaned over kissing your forehead before getting up.
"See you later babe!" He laughed walking out of the café. You just sat there before you finally processed what happened. You really hated being spacy sometimes. Blushed dusted your cheeks before you got up, too. That was way too quick plus he forgot his coat.
"H-hey! Wait up! You forgot your coat!" You yelled running out of the café. You saw that he was nowhere to be seen. The wind blew harshly as snow fell quickly.
"But aren't you cold?"
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Aren't you cold? AmericaXReader by xXKitsunexXxSamaXx

/ / ©2011-2015 xXKitsunexXxSamaXx
Random drabble is random. :P AmericaXReader






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:iconthedemidod:
thedemidod Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
Whenever my friends don't wear coats I get angry and make them wear mine. 

Friend: "I'm not cold!" *shivering*

Me: "You dumbfuck." *takes off jacket and gives it to friend*
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americanlover152 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
hahahahahahahahahaha
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SilviaMarti Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice <3
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froggy3636 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
im just like this reader but i walk around in shorts and no coat till my mom yells at me. And great story by the way.
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americanlover152 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
hahahhahahahahah til your mom yells at you
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Notallama11 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Oh. my. God. America emote Approved
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UNDEADCHESHIRE Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
This is awesome! Btw, I'm takin' requests!
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YugaMizuno Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Awww, this is cute, though. :3
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kc495 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Writer

dawwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!! so cute >.<


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creepmcpasta Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
FANGURL SHRIEK!!!!!!
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snakercow Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:fangirl: 
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DeeKayy84 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
SO CUTE XD
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hedgehogs11 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfangirlshriek:
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hedgehogs11 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:fangirlshriek: nice story
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TheDerpMasterOfDoom Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
awwww, the end...
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:iconask-kagamine:
Ask-Kagamine Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
=w= so sweet!
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Sunsetmustang Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lawls This tis adorable xD
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HetaliaFan2060 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
World is mine fits this song nicely :3 and i..i... LOVE IT~
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splitrebel Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
AWWWW
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TiffanyTheDarkCat Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
So cute!
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ninjakitty365 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love this!! its just- *faints*
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femaleAmerica Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
aww! if you cant see (the name!) im a big America fan I LOVE HIM! anyways this is a really good one (trust me i have read many Americaxreaders) anyways i just got an account and i have no clue what im doing anyways good job later
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MikuTheWolfGirl Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
awww this was really cute (\0o0/)
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blackskywolf12 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
if that was me. "puts on his coat and walks away secretly fangirling and waiting for him to call"
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:iconpichoochoo:
Pichoochoo Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is 3:36am And I can't sleep so I'm reading reader fics. This one is adorable!
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KindOfGoth Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
OMG NO I KEEP THE COAT CAUSE MY FANGIRLISM HAS TAKEN ME OVER! XD just kidding. cute story bro!~
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XCO-CheeseX Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
This is soo cute!!! X3
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Otaku7727 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
CUTE!
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Neko-Scourge Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconamericaomgplz: It was totally cute.
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ezdav321 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012   General Artist
I JUST
I DON'T EVEN
I JUST
AHHHH
ALLLFREEEDDDD
Oh fuck yes
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Gumella Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
Aww~! That was so cute~!
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:iconpozolegirl:
pozolegirl Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:3 i am such a nerd to be reading this at midnight in my room. XD
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MochiAnya Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
H3H3 that girl sounds exactly like me!~ Not being too cold and wearing a kitty hat~ :iconhappyblushplz:
especially being spacy ._.
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ItsLandOfOOOTime Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*fangirl scream* I GOT HIS COAT!!!! Lol just kidding, loved the story though!
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hetalialover345 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i would so love to have his coat oh wait he left it *snuggles in it*
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jennelle20 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Student General Artist
i know you i think
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hetalialover345 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
??????????????
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jennelle20 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student General Artist
no no i have seen your account before
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hetalialover345 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
???????????????????????????????????..............
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jennelle20 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student General Artist
i was reading somthing else on another deviant's page. i saw ur deviant there and u commented somthing. duh
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hetalialover345 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
ummmmmmm ok
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jennelle20 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student General Artist
woah u changed ur avatar it's cute
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CrushGoddess Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student Writer
sequel?
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xXKitsunexXxSamaXx Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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CrushGoddess Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Writer
thanks! :)
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AskMauritius Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwwwww! Adorable!
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XxHavoK Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyayamericaplz: That is all.
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navyangel555 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i was wondering if i can make an Alfred X Reader request. if you can please notify me and ill send you the name of the story. thanks.
- navyangel555:iconglompplz::iconyayromanoplz::icongermanyblushplz::iconyayfranceplz:
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xXKitsunexXxSamaXx Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, my requests are closed ATM.
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